grandma’s old place –
this year’s leaves falling on
last year’s leaves
© casey harn, 2014
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Hmm. Still trying…
grandma’s old place –
this year’s leaves falling on
last year’s leaves
© casey harn, 2014
**********
Hmm. Still trying…
The Distant Clamor 
This one speaks to me, Casey! It has the nostalgia that really tilts my kilt, an old homeplace. falling leaves, the promise of another spring, the simplicity I love in haiku…it has it all! Very impressive!
Thank you very much – I’m glad you liked it! I’m really happy with this one.
As well you should be. Many writers write haiku for 20 years and never achieve the level of maturity you show in this little gem! Bravo!
Ron
great. a sense of time and cycles, lovely