autumn sunrise –
slug trails are golden lace
upon the road
the countless miles there must be
between grasses, under leaves
© casey harn, 2014.
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Not a tanka that pulls at an emotional string, just a nature observation – which isn’t a bad thing these days.
The Distant Clamor 
You’re doing it right, Joe! Very impressive work with a form I find difficult. Hang in there.
Ron